"Our doubts are traitors, and make us lose the good we oft might win by fearing to attempt." -William Shakespeare

Friday, March 8, 2013

Happy {Really Late} Valentine's Day in March!

This is especially for you AmuletHeart!

Here's one of my favorite songs perfect for crummy Valentine's Days {& any & everyday days, too}...

Happy Oh-So-Late Valentine's Day!


Love, 
Ms. Dawn

P.S.: Happy Valentine's Day to you, too, HardCandy!  Hope your new teacher is great! =)

Saturday, January 26, 2013

It's 2013!


Hello, dear students!  I know I haven't posted in a while, but I wanted to say happy (late) new year!  Just think - you are more than halfway through your first year of middle school!  How's your 2013 going so far?

Your Teacher,
Ms. Dawn  

Tuesday, December 11, 2012

Oh No, I Forgot...

I forgot one of the spices!  Never in a million years would I think I would forget hyperbole!  =) That was just an example of the spice I forgot!

8. Hyperbole: an extreme exaggeration
example: After finishing my school essay, my arm was hanging by a thread - so much writing!  

Love the Forgetful,
Ms. Dawn

P.S.: Tomorrow's 12-12-12.  Surely a day worth writing about.

Tuesday, December 4, 2012

Writing Spices Review

Okay, so it's been a long time since you sat in my classroom & were surrounded by the writing spices.  So let's review.  Remember, using the writing spices all throughout middle, high school, college...forever =) will impress your teachers, make you sound intelligent, &, most importantly, make you a better writer!  

Here they are...

1. Simile: comparing two things with the word "like" or "as"
example: He's as old as a dinosaur!  Her heart beat like a drum.  

2. Alliteration: 3 or more words with the same beginning sound in a sentence or poem
example: Silvery skates slid across the sacred ice pond. 

3. Personification: giving human qualities to nonhuman things {this is my favorite spice}  
example: The wind sighed through the lonely cave.  

4. Million Dollar Words: "fancy" words that certainly aren't dead (overused)
example: The azure skies were peppered with dark loathsome clouds that seemed to chant, "Rain is on the way."

5. Dialogue: words spoken out loud by a character (or characters) in a story, with quotation marks placed around the spoken part - this should be sprinkled on, not poured
example: Lyla proclaimed, "There's the yellow spotted magenta butterfly!  Catch it, Hans!"

6. Metaphor: comparing things without "like" or "as"
example: The lake is a shining mirror and my canoe cuts through it with ease.  

7. Onomatopoeia: words that sound like the actual sound they are describing
example: It was a summer when the bees buzzed over the flowers constantly.

Spice up your writing!

Love,
Ms. Dawn

Monday, November 26, 2012

Are You Still Writers?


Hello out there in the great big, wide world of sixth grade!  

I'm here to ask you: Are you still writers?  If for a moment words sparked your excitement last year, do they still sizzle like tiny fireworks on the page, or have they merely fizzled out?  Do you let your pencil dance upon the edge of your notebook with poems & unusual characters' names scribbled in all directions (no compass in sight)?  Have you given a happy sigh when a writing assignment has come your way, or was it a loathsome groan instead?  Do you still remember azure & zephyr?  Can you recognize a portrait of Shakespeare or do you still confuse him with George Washington?  Have you plopped down & written a play lately?  Do strong words from the narrative of your own story still move you to tears?  (I hope so.  There's healing in that - & we all need that at times.)  Has the definition of personification been lost, or is it still there sitting comfortably in your memory?  Do you know the precious power you possess when you hold a pencil in your hand?  
Never forget - no matter your answers to the questions here - that you are a writer.

Love Always,
Ms. Dawn
your writing teacher

P.S.: Can you pick out the spices?

SORRY

So sorry I haven't been on here in a while!  I've not forgotten about you, dear students!
How could I ever possibly forget!  You're in my heart forever!

Love,
Ms. Dawn

Monday, September 17, 2012

Ms. Dawn Misses You All


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Hope middle school is treating you well!  Remember you are all amazing!  I'm here if you need me!

Love,
Ms. Dawn

P.S.: Keep writing!